Hey Love

Hey Love

A Poem by babyblue

Hey Love

By Ivonne Lizarraga

Hey love don't be afraid to come,and get me. To god everything look so good ,and Innocent from down here

Hey Love come make a move already,what are you waiting for the world to end. If you like me you would make a move already

 

Hey love can you see that I'm lonely.I want Something real I definitely don't want to be jaded. This feeling sucks so much.

Who the hell are you already hey love you know we're to old,and tired for these games.Hey love I bet you want something real too.

 

Hey love don't be afraid,and come to me already.What are you waiting for.You already have a sign.I'm out here waiting for a sign of love.

so don't be afraid to come to me already.Hey love why do you always hide,and never show who you . I always see you but you,but you don't make a move .

 

Hey love don't be afraid.and make a move already it's about time you do you kept it in for so long. Hey love hurry before someone else makes a move.

© 2008 babyblue


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Fix your spacing after ever comma and period in these lines---

Hey love don't be afraid to come,and get me. To god everything look so

Hey Love come make a move already,what are you waiting for the world to

Hey love can you see that I'm lonely.I want Something real I definitely don't

Who the hell are you already hey love you know we're to old,and tired for these games.Hey love I bet you want something real too.
Hey love don't be afraid,and come to me already.What are you waiting for.You already have a sign.I'm out here waiting for a sign of love.
so don't be afraid to come to me already.Hey love why do you always hide,and never show who you . I always see you but you,but you don't make

Hey love don't be afraid.and make a move already it's about time you do you

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can feel your emotion in this,, just one thing *already* i don't like correcting but it's better to know. Sometimes when you finally get what you have been wanting for so long it turns out to be not all that you expected,,, thanks for sharing... :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 4, 2008
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Hey my names ivonne i'm 19 I wirte stores,and poems i go to college . I like scremo,punk,and classic rock bands such as bob marley bob dylan underoath,sliverstian,misfits,daed kenadys,the door,and t.. more..

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