Night and day

Night and day

A Poem by babyblue


Night and day
By Ivonne L.
I think about you night, and day many times before. It’s not like me to pretend to hide my love away. I just can’t help it. I never felt my heart beat so intense before. 
I just can’t bear the pain no more. It’s killing me inside your always on my mind. I can’t explain why, I just can’t help it. It’s not like me to forgive, and forget. I don’t think I can’t handle the pain. I’ve fallen many many times before. 
I really don’t want to mess up, just like the so many times before. Since I think about you night, and day. I just can’t get you off my head your always there inside my head both night, and day. I just can’t seem to get you off my head.
I want you both night, and day. I promise I’ll never make you blue. Believe me when I say I’m true both night, and day. Just like I’m honest almost everyday, and yes I mean it when I say I love you both night, and day.

© 2009 babyblue

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I really liked that. Good writing, intresting use of punctuation in places.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Nice piece of writing..
interresting theme inside the poem packed.
what it lacks is the rhyming..
hope you don't mind when i say, i like to see poems with rhymes..

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like that it is heartfelt and honest. The title rocks!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on September 23, 2009
Last Updated on September 23, 2009



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