Poisonous Rain

little play on words.

It's all in my intake 

so clever like a snake 

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But I don't hiss or bite 

I put up a real fight.

~

I get a clever thought 

Possession can't be bought

~

They are just on the ground 

just looking to be found 

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if one shall be picked up 

they will drink from that cup 

~

Poisonous thoughts remain 

like bright colorful rain.

Author's Note

Okay, lots of metaphors here, Let's see what your take is on this.
Thank you if you review

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Pretty smile and gentle words can hide a snake in the grass my dear friend.
"But I don't hiss or bite
I put up a real fight."
I did like the above lines. You gave me reasons to write today. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[June bug]

Thank you for your reviews today.
I do appreciate them.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem my dear friend and you are welcome.

[Kim S.]

"I get a clever thought
Possession can't be bought"

I love this part, this is a really clever piece here. Maybe a sip of their own medicine in return.
This is so well written. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

[June bug]

Thank you so much my friend.

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

Maybe it's someone trying to play victim and rather get themselves caught.
This is really clever Ms. June

[June bug]

Thank you my wonderful cous'

[Sami Khalil]

You surely got clever with this; every stanza can stand alone and be appreciated

[June bug]

Thank you so much for your review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome .