Little wings

Little wings

A Poem by June bug
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Poem

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From a glass stained window 
my heart is all a glow 
looking past falling snow.
All the streets are coated 
my heart is devoted 
A little simple scene 
life is born in between
flutters of little wings.

© 2024 June bug


Author's Note

June bug
I recently won a half write contest with this and I wanted to share it with you all.
I enter random contest online sometimes. I didn't think this was all that great,
but I guess someone else did.

THANK YOU if you review.

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It reminded me of Emily Dickinson and her poem "Hope is a thing with feathers..." The image also reminds of the Belle of Amherst, the queen recluse, sitting by her window. I liked this very much, particularly these lines, "life is born in between
flutters of little wings." Very nice.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

June bug

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely review



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It reminded me of Emily Dickinson and her poem "Hope is a thing with feathers..." The image also reminds of the Belle of Amherst, the queen recluse, sitting by her window. I liked this very much, particularly these lines, "life is born in between
flutters of little wings." Very nice.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

June bug

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely review
A beautiful poem my dear friend.
"life is born in between
flutters of little wings."
We need to enjoy the good days, the kind moments. I adored the above lines. Thank you sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

June bug

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your review
I think this shows skill and possibly a real talent. Well done!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

June bug

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your review
this is really good! I really like it!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

June bug

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your review
This is wonderful June. The picture looks perfect with your prose. I like the title Little Wings.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

June bug

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your review

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June Bug is a nickname not my real name.... I share a computer with 4 other people. Sometimes we argue over it. LOL Love my cousins though. I just love to write and search for a peace of mind an.. more..

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