Walking in the rain

Poem

I've been walking in the rain 

been trying to soothe my pain 

and it has been one long walk 

on down and around the block 

I've been looking for some soul 

'My heart has taken a toll 

and racking my brain sort of 

looking for a word called love 

And I will find it one day 

it will come out of the gray 

and be so sweet as pie

leave a twinkle in my eye.

Author's Note

Simple write from me.... about a sweet love waiting to be found
Thank you if you review.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

We do hope my dear friend.
"And I will find it one day
it will come out of the gray
and be so sweet as pie
leave a twinkle in my eye."
I liked the above lines. A little bit of hope. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[June bug]

thank you for your review

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow! This has touched my with a sweet pain. As we both are sailing in the same boat. Love is hard to be found but easy to be collided. Destiny!

[June bug]

Thank you so much for your review

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A very nice read. Everyone is looking for love; some in the here and now, some in the future, some in the past. I enjoyed.

[June bug]

Thank you for your review, I do appreciate it.

[Amy R]

The way you wrote this was simply beautiful.

"it will come out of the gray
and be so sweet as pie
leave a twinkle in my eye."
It shed light at the end of the poem.
brilliant.
-Amy

[June bug]

Thank you so much Amy for your review

[Amy R]

You're welcome :))