I promise....

I promise....

A Poem by JustJordan. x3

I promise

Two simple words

That no one takes seriously anymore

Well listen to me,

And listen to me true

I’ve never fallen as hard

As I’ve fallen for you

I promise from everything deep down
I broke a promise,

and shattered our hearts

But looking at you I see

I see our future,

Our fingers interlocked

I know that’s how its suppose to be

I’m sorry I ruined this,

This being us.

Because you are perfect

Perfect as this world really is

as a summer night is,

with the moon shining bright

And your arms wrapped around me.

Please don’t let this be the end

of a perfect dream

of something meant to be.

I love you

more then words can say,

more then teens in a love story,

more then peanut butter loves jelly.

I promise…

I wont let this be the end if you don’t.

© 2011 JustJordan. x3


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Really good. In the last few stanzas though, i think it would be more clear if you changed then to than. besides that, i love it

Posted 5 Years Ago


nice!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2011
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I'm your everyday, 17 year old teenage girl. My names Jordan. I'm completely in love. more..

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