Dear Father-

"A life that ended before I knew it"

I have never walked passed you

But You are that brown, haggard leaf in the middle of summer

Clinging to the branch like a flickering street lamp trying to hold its light

I did not watch your fall-

Although I knew it was imminent

 

I stepped on you, heard you crumple and crack

Under the heel of my own shoe

I winced from that sound

Should I be sorry-

Are you?

Author's Note

Please critique harshly i would like some help fixing this up!

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i dont get what its about, can you please explain it?