Revenge Sex

when you're sitting at home

brooding,

moping,

pacing

and stewing

thinking of what i'm doing

rest assured that the

"what" should be a "who"

 

and i'll be screaming

scratching

tugging

biting

and moaning as loud as possible

because orgasms are so much better

when you're not involved.

Reviews

[Iota]

Oh this one is deadly, LOL..... Served coldly and I am sure he is hurting very deeply. Super nice poem loved it.

[Thug Life]

holllyy shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lol!! damn i jus enjoyed the anger in it! damn sumbodys got it comin to em! damn that was hott.

[Taylor Maye]

nice, if this if for someone you know then that was a total punch to the balls lol nice poem

[The Scanners See Sound]

For some reason at the end of this piece, I swore I heard a bullhorn somewhere.

[poetic soul]

uhh!! that was hot!!! hot tempered.. could sense and feel the rage that ran thru the poem... lovely write... kudos!!!!

Regards,
Poetic S()ul

[D.L. Holmes]

great, ouch, and wow. it captured so much honestly while actually saying so little aloud. The imagery was breathtaking in that it stimulated my overactive imagination. Good write.

[Odrah]

I can feel irritation and the bite in it. Last line in particular made me grin. Well penned.

[Last Lying Look]

Ha! Nice piece.

[Jack Frost]

deliciously fantazmic ;P

[Bexers]

I felt rushed to read this, so you got me involved in the rush-ness of the moment I guess you could say.
I love how abrupt it was at certain parts, then how smooth it filled out at th end.
"tugging.
biting." - abrupt

"and moaning as loud as possible" - smooth fill


Like an orgasm I suppose! xD