I Have Found The Light In You

I Have Found The Light In You

 

 

I  never saw you smile

 

Have you ever been happy before?

 

Found love on a rainy day

 

The birds weren't singing but you shined

 

Light burst through your window as it opened

 

Inside was dark but you shined through

 

You are the sunshine during a storm

Author's Note

For a school project please review!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[sarcastic]

finally sum in short

[Speakinq Uhpp ,]

Sweet . I like how the title is in the first word of your sentences . Ily sissy (:

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Great poem! The 3rd line was really the hook for me.
You really did a nice job here. I love how a person could
be an inspiration without being superstar special.

[Anicca]

I like this a lot. I'm not sure if the underlined words were necessary, I think if it was more subliminal it would be more effective, although I guess the point of the entire thing may be missed! Just my thoughts, a very creative and successful write.

[Haifa]

Beautiful one, I liked so much.

[Levioshock]

This is so cool!

[chaotic katie]

this is soo awesome savy its worth an A+ its cute, clever,creative and again awesome

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really awesome and really cute keeeeeeep it up and way to go it is awesome and you are awesome 2

[ashley]

This is clever and cute. Good job! I don't know if I would put the sentence under the word, though (if that makes sense) I would just keep it on the same line but keep the word underlined. Just a suggestion. This was cute, keep it up! :D

[Daydreamer54]

This was very cute and the 1st time i've ever seen an acrosstic poem on here. :)