Faded into oblivion

Faded into oblivion

A Poem by mou
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Just words...!

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That Rainbow

Used to come with Mellifluous voice

Turns into Phosphene.

© 2020 mou


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Sometimes it’s our mind that makes us hear differently- we need to listen carefully with the heart- we need to protect our heart from unwelcome words and actions of the world, the heart can be a very noisy room... wonderful and thought provoking, makes one think .. enjoyed reading 🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Years Ago

you are right..appreciate your words very much..and thank you for your sweet time and visit :)
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

My pleasure🌹



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This is a stunningly sparse use of fresh words grouped together for impact. "That rainbow" is a great way to leave the subject open-ended & idea-provoking. "Mellifluous voice" sounds just as good as it depicts & I had to google "phosphene" which is a brilliant word to summon a ton of visuals as to how many of the best things in life burst & then burnout. I'm sure I've never summoned so much in so few words! Hope your new year is popping as much as this poem! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

3 Weeks Ago

I feel like smooth air surrounds a poet's epiphany right now ... especially, when my poem finds a wo.. read more
Some words fade into oblivion. Others linger stubbornly. Words convey many things. They have lots of power and influence.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

3 Weeks Ago

Always a pleasure to learn from your reflection, SK.. Thanks a lot friend for your visit after long .. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome.
Brilliant. Really love this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Months Ago

Thank you..!
light and ashes

2 Months Ago

You're welcome.
love love love the language here ... rolls off the tongue ... i read somewhere that is called "milk toast" writing ..a treat to say out loud .. strong contrasts says i! i'm set up for the phosphene closing ..had to look it up so thank you for my word for the day ;) people just aren't what they seem sometimes ..hard truth in that ... the breach of trust ... can be like a migraine given in return for honesty ... phosphene makes me think of a migraine ... they can certainly begin that way :( well done..in few sculpted words ..
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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mou

7 Months Ago

I feel the blessings when my writings get your words. Thank you so much. Pardon my late response.read more
Simple and Beautiful *-*
Love the way you played with words, it's very clever !
What an imagination ! when we see it the way you described it, we can say it's somehow true !!! like rainbows are actually a melodious sound that transformed to be beautiful coulours *-*
By the way, I love the title, it's exactly the words I love ( I have some special words I love *-* ), and it's actually thetitle that captured my attention to read the poem, and Lucky me I did because i was even more amazed by its contents
Woaaw, this is just phenomenal *-*

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Years Ago

Thank a lot..it's a great inspiration :) :)
Deeply written, always love your writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
Very dreamy. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. It reminds me of feelings that fills you and leaves an aftertaste for the memory. To have such a wonder, a rainbow, have such an effect is very sentimental. I love the harmony throughout this piece as well. When I think of rainbows, I'm reminded of hope. A hope as harmonious as the sky it resides. Very thought-provoking work. Great read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Years Ago

a very beautiful review..it's a pleasure to read your words..thank you so much
lovely brevity mou just lovely words

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Years Ago

today is really a good one for me probably :) ..Just want to say a big thank you for your collective.. read more
andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

you are welcome mou
It will not likely be a rainbow again but sometimes when the gas clears and we have lived and reflected, we may go for another dip into the pot of gold if only to make sure. I really liked this. It brought about some great visuals!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by..I'm much glad that you like it
I love the picture, and this poem - I like how although it's short and 'just words' it conveys so much more with a story and a background but are still just that - words.
But words have meanings and they tell a story and the result is spontaneous poetry. Great write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mou

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your very beautiful words :)

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