The Voice Of Darkness Chapter 1

The Voice Of Darkness (Chapter 1) Part 2

As the little boy scream while the dark figure pulled him under his bed. The parents heard a scream from the little boy room. As the parents ran up stairs and open the door.The parents walk towards the bed and lifted up the covers seeing that the boy was not in his bed."What is wrong mommy and daddy"said the boy as his parents turn to see their son in a shadow near the closet. The mom sigh as she ran and hug the boy. "oh mommy i'm glad to see that your ok... just now" the little boy said as the dark figure jumped out the closet and grab her disappear into the dark. "Its your turn daddy" said the little boy with a grin on his face. "what was that thing" said the dad as he grab the flash light and shine it toward the closet. "Turn off the flash light now" the little boy yelled out. "Who are you... you are not my son... stay away from me" the dad said as he ran out the door. the dark figure chase him through the room. the dad ran in the bath room and lock the door as he sigh and look in the mirror. The dad wiped his eyes and look back in the mirror seeing his son right behind him. "How did get in here stay... right there" the dad said as he grab a plunger and hold it in front of the little boy. the little boy laughed. "Bye bye daddy" the little boy said as the dark figure jump out of the bath tub and grab the dad. The little boy laughed as the door open and walk out the door disappearing into THE 

DARKNESS 

Author's Note

Now i am done now you can read the whole thing

Reviews

[Bexfinch]

then put him or he or the little monstr

[Bexfinch]

Ok youve added the deets all right rock on i lke it . it has cinema quality i can almost see it outside my head eplaying across the scrreen

[Luna]

you need to stop repeating "the boy" every sentence. it kinda gets a bit dull. use some pronouns and you will have it down good! other than that, it is a good story!

[tora]

I am not done with it and the names will be reavled in chapter 9 or chapter 5

[Bexfinch]

needs more moira more deets and who is the boy and wat is he thinking how does the boy look

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice beginning. Ready to read more.
Coyote