You did at once

You did at once

A Poem by SarahCortland
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Allowing our fears consume us slowly kills I have experience &this is about my fear I hope to inspire you as I work through my fears to work through yours. I will not lie it takes time

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You once scared me
You once won
You haunted my dreams 
but now I'm done

You once broke me
You once held power
You controlled my life
But I will not cower 

You once hurt me
You once broke me in two
You held my emotions
But I will not give that to you

You once stole my innocence 
You once had it all
You thought you could win
But I will no longer let you make that call

© 2010 SarahCortland


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Very strong emotion and resolve. Good for you

LW

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fantastic piece, so emotional and strong! Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like how you displayed this, the repetitiveness was nice. a great emotional poem, good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


O:, i really like this one :) it's like showing that you've had enough and now your moving on :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very strong, defiance resonates throughout the whole poem. I dig this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You tell them. I love the independence you are showing in this poem. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


An excellent piece highlighting self empowerment......I like the piece and LOVE the subject.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it! Your strength really shines through.
Its awesome!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love how the emotion through this piece is very sad but at the end it brings hope and light into the piece. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is kind of sad really.
very well written and expressed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 4, 2010
Last Updated on May 20, 2010
Tags: Fears

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SarahCortland
SarahCortland

Owensboro, KY



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My name is Myspace Layouts. I love to Write poetry and I am currently working on one book. Sometimes I write short stories but Poetry is what i like to Stick to. Confidence Quotes .. more..

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