what if

A Poem by Brave girl

inspired by the irony in life!

I'm standing here,

thinking of what I've done wrong

of what made you change...

I was wasting time.

what if Imade the first step

will you carry on?

what if I stayed

would you try...I don't think so!

what if we could turn back time

if I only could take you back

would you still be mine?

© 2013 Brave girl

Author's Note

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Wórdsmíth

Very painful .. your heart roared at the time of writing this great poem ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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10 Years Ago

thanks i am glad you enjoyed reading it =D

10 Years Ago

Your welcome, Your most of the stuffs are refreshed my mind and I love reading your wonderful poems .. read more

10 Years Ago

great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rahul

Nice repetition of "WHAT"... it'f filled with too many questions and it's show us "what if this happen" what if that happen" and so on. You made me to think about it more in deep. Even we can know more about us if we think more and more about onself in a free time, this write motivated me to think myself too on me... we've to give some time to us to think who we are and where we are... where we're going and how to move on...and so on..

very great write, you seemed a great writer dear frnd :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

i'm so glad that you liked my humble poem and it's really great to see a such review,thank you

Sami Khalil

What if's are ironic if there are no tangible answers in life or love or ... I guess there has to be an echo heard somehow , somewhere . Your beloved will come your way sooner or later like mine did.... A very good poem...:)