Best friends

I wrote this to my sister

When i need someone ,it’s you who i call

You have been there through it all

Good times or bad

When we were happy or sad

When I cried the other day

You hugged me and said it would be okey

When you won your first award

I knew it was of your own accord

I smiled through my tears

As today I saw you clear

You would be there for me till the end

Because you are my best friend.

Author's Note

it's just a bit of a lot of great things about my sister

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Wow ... wonderful poem, you`ve jotted down the virtual words of your heart in this beautiful write to express how much you love your friends ;)

[Brave girl]

yea of course, but it was for my sister,so...thanks for the review :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Oh good to know, and this time, i`m again sure that your beautiful Sister`d also have loved this write you`ve penned down for her like a write that`s loved by your wonderful Mom you`d jotted down to give her a great tribute ;) Your welcome, my friend ;)

[Brave girl]

aww that's so sweet,thank you!!

[Rahul]

Today's 5th Awesome write. You've written too many writes i think. Well, i think i've got a way to pass a time on this site by reading your nice writes... lol. A true frnd is always a true one, and you've proved by this piece. Some Frnds're fake but some're good, this's a life and we've to face all kinda people/frnds.
your frnd'd be appreciating you and your this piece...

Well penned once again.

[Brave girl]

thanks again for your sweet reviews :)

[Rahul]

Your welcome, sorry to disturb you, i want to say that this's my fav. poem that's written by you.

[Brave girl]

no you didn't disturb me at all

[Rahul]

:)
Thanks for your kind words...
so, are you planning to write some more new writes ?

[Brave girl]

yea maybe, who knows?!

[Rahul]

ok... but if you want to then you can write more and more.. anyway depends on you dear frnd, to me you're a great one, whenever you write i'd love to read them all :)

[Brave girl]

thanks, i just shared some , you can totally read them if you want =D

[AdorableDreams]

I love it! I can't live without friends;)

[Brave girl]

well she's my sister and best friend;and thank you!

[Luke Rawlings]

I like this poem, it speaks of a union of people. This poem's meaning could be extended to include everyone who has a best friend, you have written a nice poem :)

[Alex Figueroa]

compassionate set of lines for your dear sister, i'm sure she would appreciate it very much when you show her =]

[Brave girl]

yea she loved it,thanks

[Alex Figueroa]

glad to hear that, i knew she would =]

[Brave girl]

:)

[Alex Figueroa]

=P

[KAin]

A sweet, beautiful poem. The authenticity of your feelings shines through here most of all.

[Brave girl]

thank you

[Leslie Philibert]

a poem that impresses with honesty and affection - good job !

[Brave girl]

thank you!

[Keith LaFountaine]

Nice poem! I can tell you have deep feelings for you sister. I would comb through it once more because there were some GUM errors. Keep up the good work!

[Brave girl]

okey thanks :)

[Gerald Parker]

You're rhyming again!

[Brave girl]

yep my rhyming again!!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Definitely an emotional write. I can feel the love you have for your sister in the beautiful word choice and phrasing you have chosen. My only suggestion for this one would possibly be to add in a little more detail or imagery so that we can truly see the depth of the relationship.

[Brave girl]

okey thanks for the advice,i'll think about it :)