Haiku #1: Belong

I remember you
When sitting in a church pew
I didn't belong

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now the impact for me in this was how it left an impression of someone in a musty church in contemplation as the words left me to ponder the circumstances. Captivating work.

[nadia dmitri]

Thank you very much, I am glad you liked it :)

[Shelley Warner]

It sounds like you felt she belonged and that made you feel like you didn't. Your poetry is beautifully transparent.

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

Love this haiku, nice one Nadia.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Love the senryu here.
Almost sounds like something Emily D. would have written had she done this
style of poetry...her sense of isolation, not fitting in with the norm.
Nicely done,
j.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

hellos, oh wow, that certainly awakes someone,
great . nice one, ----Maynard

[Arundass TP]

Great haiku. Nice meaningful lines.