Submission

I like to put these words into submission… let them hear my voice, their ears perk up when they listen… I want them to be able to complete the mission… then next time when the casting director calls, my words can ace the audition.

I like for my words to do as I say… I wouldn’t have it any other way… sometimes they like to give me attitude and likes to play… but now they understand the choreography and dances gracefully across the page like ballet… even after the show, when the curtains are pulled, and the period is at the end of the sentence, my words still stay backstage.  

Reviews

[Coffee Vampier]

Also your visuals àe linked and well put together.

[Coffee Vampier]

You have the eyes of a good actor and the ability to speak like one. Your structure is consistent and well done.

[NelliKong]

Thank you so much for the feedback. I appreciate your feedback. Happy that you enjoyed my poem