A Mermaid Made Me Do It

I swam with a mermaid before… in my thoughts in a specific drawer. This mermaid wasn’t Ariel at all. She didn’t want to become apart of my world… her evil powers forming in her palms in which they whirled. She in fact wants me to be under the sea… doesn’t want me to breathe… literally watch me lose my breath and enjoying me scream for a plea… she swarms around me and the buzzing intensifies as if there were a thousand bees.

The shore is right there, but she has me pulled in like the tide… waves crashing down on me like a roller coaster ride. Unlike Disney I’m not seeing the happily ever after… just another internal human natural disaster… the whirlpool is approaching faster… calling for someone to save me like a paster… but sadly the mermaid was already a master.  

Reviews

[Feelings In Motion.]

I love how u rhymed with your pain in the end.
It's amazing how you wrote a poem in contrast to a disney movie.
This is surely an artwork and I LOVE IT.

[NelliKong]

Thank you so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. Thank you again for the support.

[Feelings In Motion.]

You're most welcome

[Chris]

People seem so lost amongst the numbness driving our lives.

[NelliKong]

Thank you for your feedback.

[Coffee Vampier]

I want to travel to Germany to meet the real mermaids and live on the River. The Rhine would be so lovely out side in the cold.

[NelliKong]

Germany is a beautiful place.

[Coffee Vampier]

Why kind beauty is Germany to you.

[NelliKong]

Never been so I really can't say. But pictures look great

[Coffee Vampier]

I'd like to go some time, I'd be beauty.