My last hope

My last hope 
you once promised me infinity
not but a fleeting hope
gone with the wind
scarred

Reviews

[Soren]

Direct to the point, a short poem that speaks clearly

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for your comment, Soren!

[Pete]

ouch. so well worded and emotive. powerfully straight to the heart. perfect title that captures the dark, hurt feeling ...

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for such a wonderful review, Pete! I really appreciate it!

[willweb]

One promise in particular comes to mind as I read this...oh, I should say one "broken" promise comes to mind and it hurt. Nicely expressed my friend.

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for your comment, Willweb!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have been promised and scarred enough to really appreciate this poignant write.
simple in wording but complex in feeling.
j.

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for your appreciation, Jacob!

[Seriana]

Hum, promises broken. Short and to the point. I like your word choices to make this piece work. Very nice!

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for reviewing, Seriana! I really appreciate it.