Clouded

Clouded

A Poem by Your Shooting Star.

Clouded

In the darkness, we'll prevail.

In the sky, we'll be the hail.

For slumbered nights like poisoned dreams,

The heart's dull beat, and children's screams.

© 2009 Your Shooting Star.


Author's Note

Your Shooting Star.
Inspiration: My inspiration was how I haven't seen my bestfriend in over a week, and it's crushing me. I dedicate it to her.

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This is short and has feeling.. Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice piece of work there.Short,simple,and it has FEELING!

Posted 14 Years Ago
Its short simple... and really amazing... very nice..

Posted 14 Years Ago
WOW, this is an awesome piece, and well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on June 29, 2009
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Your Shooting Star.
Your Shooting Star.

LaSalle, Canada



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