Her Lips

I wrote this based off of a girl kissing a girl. I hope you enjoy! Read the Note too.

Her lips were calling from the other side of the room

Plump and juicy as they lay upon her face 

Eyes that sparkle like the brightest of stars 

Her body has a sway that even the wind would be jealous of

My eyes cannot look away from the beauty across the room 

She wears her hair just so to accentuate her busty curves 

The want to kiss her, hold her grows with each sway of her hips 

Can she feel the heat coming from my body as I think of her?

Her lips still call to mine to kiss them 

My heart beats faster as the thought runs through my mind 

She walks closer with her vivacious curves 

Her eyes meet mine and speak the same words my mind is thinking 

Our lips meet with a serge of heat flowing through 

The deeper the kiss the crazier for her I became 

I felt my knees go weak as her tongue danced in my mouth 

She drove me wild without saying a single word 

Her lips called to me from across the room

Now attached in a crime of passion 

Electricity flowing through them like a lighting-bolt  

As if they parted the world would come crashing down

We part with only a small space in between us  

She leaves me with a simple smile 

Leaving me wanting more, 

Wanting her lips to call me again from across the room.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem like the description says about a girl kissing a girl. I have never kissed a girl (or a guy) for the matter but I digress. I hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Sue]

Beautiful, and ...steamy!!! Phew! I really enjoyed the intimacy of this poem. I know how difficult it can be to capture emotion in the form of a writing but you did great!

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much!! I thought I would write out of my comfort zone. It really was fun writing something I didn't think I would write about. So glad you enjoyed my work =)

[Sue]

You're welcome :)

[Fire Mage Andrea]

This is erotic and sensual in a good way. In other words, it's not smutty or over the top.
"Leaving me wanting more,
Wanting her lips to call me again from across the room." - That bit makes you want to find out what they're going to do next. It's really well written and I like how descriptive it is.

[sivan]

i like the innocence in the poem... i am a lesbian so my stuff is different written on the same topic but still yours was good from a different angle

[A. Amos]

What i loved the moat was freedom of yoir expression. Beautiful

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much for your kind review =)

[ron]

WOW. This is HOT. You described the perfect kiss. I needed some fresh air after I read this. Its fantastic.

[MandaBear]

Thanks I was trying something new. I am glad you liked it. *opens windows to let air in* lol

[ron]

Lol. You made me believe.

[MandaBear]

So glad you liked it. I usually don't write this kind of stuff so it is nice to have someone like it =)

[ron]

You are most welcome =)

[MandaBear]

=) You think I should write another one?

[ron]

I would love to read it. So YES YES YES =)

[s y e]

OK, well I never expected it to be lesbian like but you sure pulled it off, girl. Nice one.

[MandaBear]

Thanks! I wanted to try something different.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Great lesbian sensuality portrayed here!

[MandaBear]

Thank you! I really tried hard to make this one good =)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

You're welcome.

[junaid altaf]

simply exotic!
well versed....

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much.

[junaid altaf]

welcome always