Tainted Heart

After not writing for a while this is what comes out. Hope you enjoy

My heart was pure before you came along

So simple, light and full of life 

Without the smallest blot of darkness,

That now consumes it.

Reviews

[Kreative Kana]

Thank you for entering my contest, MandaBear. If you have any friends you think may be interested in joining, feel free to invite them. Thank you, again! Keep up the good work.

[Jamestown]

This is so true in many relationships unfortunately, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lea Walker]

Its short but great and meaningful.

[MandaBear]

Thank you very much!

[ron]

WOW...this is powerful in just a few words.
You are gifted.

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much! I was writing it last night and just felt it was perfect. =)

[ron]

It is short sweet and to the point.
I think it is perfect as it is.

[ron]

Put a period at the end of it.