Your Kiss

Your Kiss

A Poem by MandaBear
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Something for someone special <3

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You left me with a kiss 
Your sweet taste on my lips 
A tender showing of your love 
Unforgettable reminder of your touch 

Your passion engulfed my senses 
Took over my body with one embrace 
Lost together in a single moment 
Binding as one with your forbidden lips 

You left me with a kiss 
Your sweet taste on my lips 
A kiss uniquely yours 
A kiss uniquely ours 

You leave me wanting more of your kiss 

© 2016 MandaBear


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Wonderful sense of passion and the kiss and the uprising of emotions sprung from love and all its meanings yes true love exist. Your passionate writings show its true. Beautifully done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the feeling of wonder, excitement, and suspense as you think about the kiss in this poem. I almost don't want you to have that picture there so that we can just have this kiss in our imagination, because the poem gives us the images beautifully already. Anyway, good work and looking forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice gentle flow of thoughts making the sweet kiss come alive and well. You create perfect place and vision. A proper kiss can take us to perfect place. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very beautiful and romantic poem indeed.
I liked the picture to go with it, its like the finishing touch to this wonderful piece.
Written well, flows together quite well.
Its romantic like I said, beautiful, emotion filled, deep, meaningful and moving.
I tend to say that about allot of poems but its true lol.
I enjoyed this read.
Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much I am so glad you enjoyed it. I had a really good person to be inspired from =)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
Simply beautiful. Once again you show yourself to be incredibly talented through few words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you! That put a smile on my face =) Thank you for such a kind review
Its like a heart burning in passionate love just by a soft kiss......Very heart-warming to read in cold weather.....Loved it mate....Full ratings.....Clappings!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! You are really too kind =) Believe it or not it took me 2 days to come up with th.. read more
Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

Hm... i think the poet's thoughts were very powerful at the moment of writing this....Very lovely wo.. read more
MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I really put my emotions about a special someone into this too.

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Added on January 28, 2016
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