A Love Unrealized

I was inspired by some shows I was watching... (still working title but this is the one I have for now)

Have you ever had a love so perfect, it’s out of this world?

Longed for the touch, you know you won’t feel?

Longed for the kiss, your lips will never meet?

Longed for the love, you know you will never have?

A love so perfect the stars can’t shine as bright

The sun would seem dim held against it 

Your heart beats so fast time can’t catch up 

All that matters is the two of you and the love you have 

A love so amazing, it felt unreal

Two star crossed lovers forced to keep their love in the shadows

Where only they know how much they care for each other

While wearing a mask for everyone to see, all the while hiding a love no one knows exists 

Reviews

[aziza]

More deeper and more,more beautiful!

[Lydia Shutter]

A very difficult situation to be in. If love has to be kept in the shadows, it is destined to hurt someone....if not more than one someone. Powerful emotions and romance in this one. Lydi**

[MandaBear]

Thank you for the lovely review. Much appreciated

[Inject Positivity]

Woo-hoo!!! That is amazing Manda, beautiful beautiful... I loved the thoughts in the poem with a touching feel... Simple yet very lovely word choices... Can't help but feel the love in it.... Very well done dear poetess....

Sincerely
Dhiman

[MandaBear]

Thanks for the lovely review. I try to put as much feeling as I can in everything I write. One day I might even be as good as you =) (when I grow up lol)

[Inject Positivity]

You are far greater than me my frnd....

[MandaBear]

Okay lets agree to disagree lol haha

[Inject Positivity]

What a line haha...