Don't play with Fire

I wrote this about Pyrophobia (Fear of fire and being set on fire). I hope you like it :)

Snap....Crackle....Pop....

The smell of smoke fills the room.

No way to get out; No way in.

Suffocating on dirty air.

Run...Run...Run away.

No place to hide.

Getting hotter and hotter.

The smell coming closer. 

Snap...Crackle...Pop 

Sound is approaching fast 

No time to get away

Being engulfed as we speak

Burnt ashes on the floor 

No remains left of what once was.

Fire waged a war and won.

Life is now up in smoke.

Snap...Crackle....Pop...................

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

This is a wonderful Write, Very deep and sad tho

[Missy Moooooo]

Well I for one love fire, and the smell of it, this may sound bad but when people's houses are set on fire I just take a deep breath.
But nice write being it's about fire it kept me warm inside. But also a sad sad write.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

This would be one of my worse fears. Snap...Crackle...Pop...I don't think I'll be able to eat Rice Krispies again!

[jennifer little]

wonderful poetry

[EMMIE]

I love the "Snap...Crackle....Pop" I could actually hear those sounds in my head. Very, very creative I love it.

[Southern Angel]

I like it :)
Great poem