Goddess of the fight

just something i made up before i went to work. Tell me if you Love or Hate it???

Spears, Knifes and Cannons 

When battle cries are plenty

Warriors prepare for war, 

For the battle ahead.

Kings prepare for the war at hand

They pray to Athena for a blessing.

Hoping that the sacrifice they make 

Grant them a victory in combat.

Going up against a worthy foe.

With weapons at their toes.

Running toward an uncertain fate.

Hoping just by chance they win.

Bloody bodies comes in masses. 

The death toll rises by the minute.

Yet, sprites are high between me and you.

So, what would Athena do?

As the battle goes on,

There is a light of mystical proportions.

Athena is here, Athena is here they shout.

Ready fight the enemies fighting about.

Clash, Clink, Crash and bang.

Is the only sounds you here.

Soon enough you see a white flag appear.

The traitors have fought their last fight.

So the troops later that night 

Thanked Athena with all their might

For now they can sleep at ease tonight.

The conquers have met their match.

Reviews

[patricia]

a touch of 'Homer' here. very interesting, the way warriors will call upon the gods and goddesses in these situations. You wrote this before going to work...intriguing! Thankyou.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice descriptions

[Angelic Surrender]

Epic :)

[jennifer little]

i loved this poem great job its amazing and wonderful thanks for sharing this poem with me it was amazing keep up the good work