My Precious Love letter

just something i came up with :) I was inspired by one of my friends on here. After reading her poem I had to write this :) So thanks SuicidePact :)

Shall I compare thee to a summers day?

Shall I compare thee to any day?

I bequeath my heart to you my dearest.

Dare I say I love you. 

You have stole my heart.

A modern day thief.

You knew my one weakness...

A simple kiss. 

Though you are not near.

In my dreams you are so clear.

Love you know my every thought.

My every wish, my deepest secret.

I think of writing you all the time

What can I tell you that you don't already know?

I never wanted to see you half as bad as I do now.

I would give anything to see you.

Shall I compare thee to a summers day?

Shall I compare thee to any day?

Is there anything thing I can say?

For you my heart lay.

You are my heart

My soul, 

My darkest secret,

My only weakness.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of a old line. I like the repetition and the desire of the poem. I like the statements and description of joy and peace in the words. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[SuicidePact.]

as soon as I saw the title i was hooked, this was simply amazing my favorite line perhaps was the one that said:

'Though you are not near.

In my dreams you are so clear.'

that hit me, i know that very feeling and i know it well.

great poem!

[Cassie Fraga]

lots of confessing in this piece, and the last stanza is very deep. nice penning my friend!! keep it up!!