Sweetest Kiss

Sweetest Kiss

A Poem by MandaBear
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I saw a contest and it said to write a date from the pov for the boy so here is my take on it. Hope you like it.

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A sweet kiss to end what was a perfect night.
She, I feel is the one that i want to call mine.
My heart is pounding with the joy I feel.
She is perfect and no one can compare.

Our date started like any other.
I was sweating like a pig waiting for her.
She came down the steps like an angel.
I felt as though we were the only ones in the room.

Clearing my breath finally I said something.
You look simply amazing.
She let out a little giggle and an heart stopping smile.
So off we went to your date.

A simple candle light dinner
Endless chatter and laughs galore.
I thought to my self 
She looks magnificent in this light.

I couldn't keep my eyes off of her.
We finished our dinner and walked to the car.
She said she loved the dinner.
I let out a smile and a happy feeling came over.

I told her I had a surprise for her.
She looked up and wondered what it could be.
We arrived in a field and laid out was a blanket 
We walked over and watched the stars.

Talking and talking we almost lost track of time.
I took her home and opened her door.
Now is the moment of truth 
Will I get that good night kiss?

She leans in and.......

A sweet kiss to end what was a perfect night.
She, I feel is the one that i want to call mine.
My heart is pounding with the joy I feel.
She is perfect and no one can compare.

© 2013 MandaBear


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Those sweet kisses are what we remember in old age. I like the emotion and excitement in this poem. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved the fact you accepted the challenge and you mastered it so well !
Again I loved the use of quatrains ! Just feeling there's something missing ... your signature (the final verse, resuming everything) !!
Good poem, good job =D

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how the first and last stanza are the same, a wonderful end to a romantic date!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well, you did a great job! Let us hope there is a guy out there that has these beautiful feelings when they are on a date with a girl :) Nicely done, my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Brilliant. It's really romantic, and I think a lot of people find romance writing hard, especially for poems, but you did it amazingly. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2012
Last Updated on June 27, 2013
Tags: kiss, love, affection, admire, date, nervous, poem, poetry


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