Inner Thoughts....

I did this for a prompt. Like when a girl likes two guys at the same time and wants both but has to choose like a love triangle. I hope it comes across that way!! Love or hate?? Let me know!

I love you... 

No wait I love him...

No that's still not right...

I love you both.

Oh, I wish i could make up my mind.

You both are so amazing.
One is so romantic

The other is adventurous.

Which should I choose?

Romantic or Adventurous?

Why? Oh why? Must I pick?

Why can't I have both?

I love you... 

No wait I love him...

No that's still not right...

I love you both.

My torrid love affair has to end.

I will hurt one of you.

Yet, that's not what I want.

What should I do?

Oh, What a triangle to be in!

I must set them both free

I cannot let them suffer

All because of me.

So I set you free...

I still love you...

No wait I still love him..

Oh, I'll never get it right.

I still love them both.....

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

and the circle still cycles...... oooohhh how I understand!!! you did an amazing job on this write!! thank you for sharing!!!

[The White Wolf]

I suck at math so I have never cared much for triangles but I have always deduced that if you can't be happy with a linear relationship then you should probably not be in a relationship in the first place.

[Coyote Poetry]

In my lifetime. I had to choice who was my love and who was left behind. Today I look back and know I made the wrong decisions. When you choice someone for the wrong reasons. Pain will be the answer. I like the flow of thoughts and the desire of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very interesting :) I like the chorus :) Are u really living that awful situation? Sorry, Amanda :(

[BikerAngie]

Sorry I just read that this was for a prompt well yes Job well done!

[BikerAngie]

LOVE IS BOTH A CHOICE AND A FEELING! Feeling as hard to control but you do have a choice about not getting into such a situation. I know one thing I only want one man and that is the man God ordains me to have for in him is the perfect Mate. I feel blessed I feel I have found just that man note the picture I finally posted that is me and my man Gino. As for the poem it full of twist and turns and conflicted emotions well written. I only Pray for your sake and theirs that it is fictitious.

[Michael X]

I get a strong impression of a triangle type love, from, both of the suiters are
the lower two points and the top point is the mistress, a perfect triangle,
to crave a love then to crave another, such is desire of the fleeting kind,
you express the form with lively fashion and classicness, pure romance,
keep up the great work ^_^