Nothingness

This is about a guy that is looking at himself in the mirror and not liking what he sees. Love or hate?

I look into your eyes and see pools of empty thought

Void of any emotions, any heart.

No breath to speak of

Is there any life in there?

I look into you heart and saw pure black

An emptiness so cold it could freeze hell.

Somewhere that should make you feel loved; 

Is just a place you go to die.

I look at your body and see a frail figure,

Beat down, broken, and bruised. 

Skin so pale and white, 

You could see the gloom of your heart.

Once a soul of many colors,

You gave a rainbow a run for its money.

Your soul shined brighter than the sun. 

Your heart had an infinite amount of love.

Looking for a escape 

A way to run from your self 

Run from the image the scares you so

Your afraid to come back to life

You are terrified of what you see 

You can't even look your self

You force yourself in the mirror 

You have to face what you fear the most

When looking in the mirror

I see eyes, heart and a body

A former shadow, 

Of the man I wish I could be. 

Reviews

[Michael X]

You have the sentence formation down, and the words are a stageplay
of intent and imagery that invokes a sense of awareness, excellent job.