Better

My friends have betrayed me.

My mother has internally bruised me.

My father is ashamed...

But I'm better.

Used to sleep under rain clouds,

now bathing in the glorious, gloden sun.

Happiness healing my bruised soul.

Once lost in pain...

now found by hope.

Hope of a better day.

And it's coming.

It has to.

Although, I'm still in pain...

I'm better!

Reviews

[Disa Sig]

Very well written, it has hope in it.. I fell it.

[deeps]

I agree with Kendall, staright and to the point here.
Very well said and written.

[Kendall Edison]

nice and straight to the point

[Rhine Wolf]

loved it!!!
so simple yet so hard to do!
believing that the worst is over is the first step to recovery, Strength to you!

Blessed be,
Fallon

[Spoken]

glad the storm clouds are receding for you.. With a little faith and hope things eventually get better. I great emotional release from the heart!

[The DuchessPoet]

My darling you wrote this... ok
I mean it is just enough magic to give what you gave!
I love it and i am glad that you choose POETRY as one of the means for your expression!
We need your talent and your gift shows itself very well!

I too am a creature of the theatre acting was my life for many years!
I feel you
I really do

Very well done, my talented friend!
very well stated!

[Kevin]

Sorry I've been kind of preoccupied with my own storms and demons. This is very well done and despite the pain so raw in the beginning you give the hope that you are not defeated. I liked this and appreciate the courage it took to post it. Thank you.

[Egan]

Things will get better and they are hun. I love you stay strong for yourself. They can break every part of your physical being but they cant break your essence your heart. They cant take your soul. I LOve you I know we dont talk as much but I am always thinking of you. I am always reminded at rehearsal that your are not there and when I get pissed off!!!! or im on the verge of suicide you are my light. I love you sooooo much!!! Stay strong bottom. You dont have much longer and when I come back from college I will take you away on a trip that will make you forget this s**t!! You are my bestie!!! I love youi to death even through all the bullshit!!! I LOVE YOU!!

[shinybluestars03]

Well its good to know that even though
you have gone through so much you have
learned to cope with it all because not everyone
can do that. So, keep on living life and keep a smile on your face.
Live today to the fullest because tomorrow is never promised.
Thanks for sharing and keep on writing

Best wishes