Emotional Algebra

If you think 

you only got five senses

and can only live once,

let me tell you,

you suck at

emotional algebra

Author's Note

One can transcend the normal.

Reviews

[Rim]

This is brilliant Manal ! I do suck at Emotional algebra I guess, probably because I pretend to be a realistic, deny the existence of pure emotion.
Algebra is the most fascinating thing in Maths, as it defines our lives by logic, our social lives can be calculated by it, but I'm no expert in emotional substances, so I can't say that it could calculate emotion ..

[Daydreamer]

Haha,Rim! I'm mind blown now xx
Never mind, now you know the new rules ;)
follow them xx
much love xx

[Rim]

Haha, yes Sir !

[Daydreamer]

😎✌😎✌😎✌✌

[Jennifer Warrington]

I love the title...that drew me right off the bat. This almost has a hakuish (I know it isn't a word...just close to what I was thinking) feel to it. Like the simplicity of this not many abstractions too. One little itsy tinsy thing (I know kinda nit pick) first stanza - If you think you've....other then that pretty cool read.

[Daydreamer]

Jennifer your review made me happy! 💖
You mean you think it shouldn't have started this way? How do you imagine it then?
Thankyou 💘

[jacob erin-cilberto]

life is an equation that seems to have many solutions...we never seem to find all of them do we?

[Daydreamer]

Hahaha,infinite solutions! But I'm sure you embraced what i meant.. I just wanted to convey that's its important to acknowledge that "ordinary" can be transcended and that adds a lot to life! 😃

[Michelle Farren]

I agree with this poem. Some people don't always count their blessings. People need to learn to live more and realize that they do only have one life but they need to get out there more and enjoy it and experience new things. I love this piece (:

[Daydreamer]

Michelle you're so sweet😍😍😍
I always love to stand against the "common"/mainstreamread moreMichelle you're so sweet😍😍😍
I always love to stand against the "common"/mainstream
I love to stand out!

[Patience]

Couldn't have said it better myself xD

[Daydreamer]

HAHAHA😆😆😆😆😆

[Sami Khalil]

A brilliant write...:)........................

[Daydreamer]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[Addy]

I really like it. Expecially how you took two things that people commonly believe (five senses and live only once) and turned them into unknowns.

[Daydreamer]

Because I strongly disagree with the conceptions they've stemmed from! Life is the biggest fantasy of all and this poem is written in such a sense that it's a homespun reflection of what I define "life/living"
Thankyou Addy for visiting xD💖💖💖💖💖

[Linda alexander]

Well said, seeing beyond eyes can not reach, hearing frequencies ears can not reach, measuring wave length only heart can do, feeling souls are done by other senses called true and real senses, enjoyed

[Daydreamer]

Omg! Your comment is deep and relatable! My pleasure :)

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care

[Anahat]

this was nice...short but true and real...
Something different...I liked it...Well done :)

[MsJewel]

So much truth in this clever little gem!

:) Julie

[Daydreamer]

So much kindness in this little comment:*