I surrender.

A Jorio

 

With every season passes,

Heart resembles broken glasses.

Fading this season's mist,

I thus surrender everything.

Reviews

[Emily Pazienza]

This is beautiful!

[deeps]

I like this write it's hopeful

[Together]

I too surrender for it!

[Emily B]

Beautiful! Somedays it is best to surrender.

[Roxy]

Beautiful metaphor!

[Travis Lawrence]

"Heart resembles empty glasses" is a great line of poetry. Well done for something so brief, it's sharp.

[Innocent]

I appreciate true work like this!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Yeah! it's the worst situation of life...
But I don't think so that you should surrender so soon!
:)