A Poem by iron_rose

This was written for an angel. <3

I lifted up my wary head
and I just had to catch my breath
for I have fallen speechless
at the very sight of you

And then it came to my surprise
an angel standing in the light
and God, you're just so beautiful
I can't believe you're mine

And so I opened up my eyes
and then I came to realize
the dream is already over 
but you're still here holding me tight

I found myself totally amazed
how could it be that I'm holding Heaven's grace
safe and warm
in these arms of mine?

So please hold me like you told me
let your wings carry me high
and while all the stars collide
I'll be flying away with you tonight

And tonight...I break away

© 2014 iron_rose

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breathtaking, your words bring out the love you have for her magically.. you must be in love with an angel :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just put this in my library. Just thought I'd tell you.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Ahh, so sweet :)
Great poem, I love the cheesiness of it, as I did with your other poems. They all just have such a young and fresh feel to it, if that makes any sense.
And LOL, that is actually so sad that she thought she was too pretty for you...
Cheers and have a good day.

Posted 12 Years Ago

You are an inspiring writer, keep up the beautiful work. This is a wonderful poem and your style of writing is unique. Love this poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow this is wonderfully beautiful! I do indeed love your style of writing! They actually tell stories when you look deeper into them! :) This is such an awesome poem! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

beautiful and heartfelt! I could feel your emotions. I bet she is breathtaking!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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6 Reviews
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on September 4, 2011
Last Updated on January 3, 2014
Tags: angels, wings, romance, dark, poem



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