Remeber you.

I will always remember you,
for you taught me how to love
us ending was heart-breakin'
but better off that way, we're too different
I'm fine, thanks for not caring.
I'm still a child, for now
       even tho your
       acting childish.

I won't forget the way
you made my heart skip beats,
you were my protector
but I was blinded
   your not anythin' good
  your not right for me.

Goodbye now, I will forever remember you.
 

Author's Note

I wrote this right after i rode my Pony Nala. :)
Let me know if I did good showing my emotions. Reviews appreciated. <3

Reviews

[Hana Linzi]

This is an amazing peice of writing. Amazing! You showed the emotions that you wanted to get to. I love your writing, so keep doing it, You show that yeah im here but ima be strong even if i dont want to carry on with life.. amazing!!!

[Hiddenfire]

I think you portrayed your emotions well enough, it does have a sort of wizened outlook and feel to it and it has the feel of finally letting go or more accurately the willingness to move on.

[A.Pinto]

Your emotions are very pure in this poem and I feel like I can really relate. It's a little heartbreaking and wistful, and it shows how you've grown as a person through the process.

[Eleanor]

You did a really good job showing your emotions. Great job.
-Eleanor

[ATG]

You did a great job at showing your emotions in this poem. I got the sense of loving someone, hating them, and moving on. The poem was very well written and the word choice was great.