Don't Fake It

Don't Fake It

A Poem by Love's Merciless.

Feel me through every bone

Press my back into the damp soil

 

Let raindrops run

Down every curve

 

Let my tongue

Flicker like the flames that dance in the campfires heat

 

Conjure up all your energy and get slickened by it

Bite into the darkest red apple you can find

 

Snapshot every moan, every sigh

Every smile crossing my lips

 

Let the amnesia set in but let me

 Recall your name

 

Let my lips

Confide in you and everything you promise

© 2011 Love's Merciless.


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What did one have to promise for such an adventure? and I like how it will be reminded to them. This is truly steaming hot poetry but it is sensual and alluring all at the same time. all I can say is mmm mmm mmm.. perfect.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You are a Poet. The poem had a feel of a hunger and desire needing to be fulfilled.
"Snapshot every moan, every sigh
Every smile crossing my lips"
I like your words and emotion in this poem. No better place to be. When the desire take over and the body needs are in control. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Love's Merciless.
Love's Merciless.

Reno, NV



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I'm a 20 year old student that's constantly moving, I decided to join this cafe because in the process of work, school and being a college student I have lost time for the most important thing to me. .. more..

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