LONDON CALLING ... AT THE TOP OF THE DIAL

LONDON CALLING ... AT THE TOP OF THE DIAL

A Poem by R J Askew
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The Clash took their title from the BBC's wartime broadcasts to occupied Europe ... the pic, which I took just before going in for a drink wiv me mates, is of one of my fave London pubs ... cheers!

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Your eyes
your Eyesssss
I HOTLY request
To be in your eyes
To be, to be, to be in your eyes
Swish, swish
Swirl, swish
In the swim, in the swim of this shimfinsome fish
My soul request is that you read hear

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© 2011 R J Askew


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I had a brother come back from Europe with a suitcase full of wine. I was a young man but old enough to partake. This provided the opportunity to initially be introduced to a high standard, therefore till today I have a discerning palate. The poem about the towel provides for me a higher basis for poetic quality. I give you a gentleman’s bow and say bravo.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your words pulsate from the page, like a wanton unstrained person ready to devour their prey. Great use of erotic imagery of been swished and swirled that brings this write to life.

A brilliantly executed and a wonderful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully done!
Love the first lines of the poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


To be forever lost in a sea of blue...what a charming thought.

your Eyesssss
I HOTLY request
To be in your eyes

I was also thinking this could also be "a holy request"....superb writing. xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


your website is effortless and user friendly but holds the poets attention, well done and creative.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Superb work love and I love the link! Have favourited if thats a word lol ! xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago



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