Sea in a Seashells

Sea in a Seashells

A Poem by Tinabells
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Nature sends help for my soul

"
The breeze caress my skin
I felt it deep within
Even though it is thin
Enough to make you clean

The birds in air chirping
Sounds good in my hearing
How high they are flying
Above the clouds is amazing

My dog who's beside me
Truly the best to see
He jumps like an awardee
As I come with glee

It is a wonderful day
To give yourself pleasure today
Many things that can't pay
The happiness you will delay

© 2019 Tinabells


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A amazing poem. The good description made me wish to be near the sea.
"The birds in air chirping
Sounds good in my hearing
How high they are flying
Above the clouds is amazing"
I liked the above lines, a lot.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

It's a honor to have you reviewed my poems. Thanks a lot Coyote.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Was my honor to read your work and you are welcome.
here you give nature the personification of a person

one with open arms


perhaps a physician or medic , ready to operate


each verse washes over the eyes like the ocean you illustrate

cleansing perception as it creates one anew


-L.S

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

I appreciate your review here Luke. Thank you!
Beautiful and sweet and I love
the rhyme hidden in this wonderful
Piece.

Nicely penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

thank you benita :)
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome 👍
Such a wonderful truthful write here. very nicely written

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmie! I appreciate it!

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