Staying Strong

The days are getting stronger,

When it gets time for you to come home.

I miss you so much boo,

It's killing me.

I love you so dearly,

And I know you love me too.

Our Love just keeps getting stronger,

And It will always be there baby.

When I start to cry,

Thinking of you Holding me,

With this Smile on my face,

I know that I am staying Strong,

Just for you baby.

Anything,

Everything,

And always

For you baby.

I will keep Staying Strong.

Reviews

[Paul Okeke]

this is simple and nice......

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful. Love is give and take. In life I learn giving gave me more pleasure then taking. That is when we gain wisdom. I like the feel of this poem. A strong heart yearning to love with all their heart. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[zappy]

i love the way u talk about you're strength this is great

[Senseless whatever]

Missing wanting yearning, all conveyed very well here. A good emotional write.

[A.Lee]

I really like this one. It speaks of pain, yet strength and endurance for love. I know that feeling. I went through a period where I had to be separated for someone I loved for a while and thats exactly how I felt. Very very well done. This is my favorite of yours so far.

[aftervision]

stay strong and forever young my poet

[deeps]

This is so wonderful i like this alot

[Mike Espinosa]

Your capitalization of actions and characteristics is very interesting. It gives the poem a little more character and helps the emotion come through. I'd watch your commas, of course, but it doesn't affect the poem too much. Good job.

[Ruth]

A passionate write of honesty:) xx

[Sarah]

awe :) i can relate to this right now...except mine didn't go anywhere lol