Desire

Third one of my sensual poems... Free Verse

   

    Desire....

I can't help looking ...

naked he stands,

his body, a young man's;

yet ...

older.

Behind the door  ...

hiding,

watching him shave ...

knowing

soon his legs

will cover mine.

Air heavy

in moaning desire,

he appears ...

bodies press together; 

yearnings release

we both desire.

Quivering anticipation;

our love continues....

through the night.

          ~~~

Author's Note

If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would appreciate a review.
I always review whatever I read.
Thank you,
Lisa

Reviews

[Relic]

Lisa! You certainly are turning out to be the sensual one, aren't you. haha Your choice of words and the anticipation you share and have shared in your other poems is a fine style to undertake. I'm sure the girls on the site will see this and blush. :)

[Lisasview]

Thank you for being the first one to review this poem..
I wrote it yesterday.. Found the photo today and submitted it..Richard suggested that I make it more persona,l not as an observer..which it originally was..
Lisa, cold and dark now in Spain..

[Neville]

good old Richard ............ its just warming up here in England :)

[Lisasview]

Suppose to pour.... again...here
Lisa

[Neville]

ah' well dont they say 'the rain in Spain falls mainly on the plain' .. :)

[Lisasview]

Ha ha......

[Pete]

so real and impassioned. very well done ... :)

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Pete.. this is one of there seductive poems i submitted recently..
Never tried writing anything seductive before..
Lisa

[Adriana]

This is lovely and definitely feel how much she wants him.

[Lisasview]

Hi Adriana,
You got it!! Yes, she definitely wants him...
Thank you for the review.. I really appreciate. it..
Lisa, now in Spain

[Fran Marie]

A well penned sensual
poem ..expressing deep
thoughts of anticipation
of sweet desires

nice work

[Lisasview]

How nice of you to review my poem.. This is my 3rd try and sensual poetry... so It is great to think it is nice work.
Perhaps you will find the time to read my first two...
Thank you again,
Lisa, now is sunny Spain.

[Soren]

Very sensuous erotic and well done.

[Lisasview]

Thank you Soren...This is my third sensual poem...
Never wrote anything like this before..read moreThank you Soren...This is my third sensual poem...
Never wrote anything like this before..
Lisa

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Woah a desirous sensual poem, romantic and full of passion. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

[Lisasview]

Thank you enjoying and reviewing my poem
This is the third sensual poem I have ever written.
Did you see my other two??
I will look at yours today
Lisa, now in Spain

[JMaster1]

Lisa!!!
You are the queen of the sensual poetry, what a beautiful tender sensual words
I am addicted , I adore you

[Lisasview]

What a very nice thing to say... So this is my third try at sensual poetry..Did you read my other two?
And Thank you!!