Walk with me

If not the entire journey, then just a few lanes, please walk with me.

Disappear sometimes in between so I get used to walk alone and not fear solitude.

Whenever I tumble, I will get up myself, just be there to listen how I struggled and got up again.

When my heart is full of pain and my vision is blurry with tears,

Don’t share my pain and just smile at me, that smile will be the most beautiful thing ever.

Sometimes hold my hand when I am on a wrong path, other times let me commit mistakes.

When I reach towards the end of the tunnel and look back,

Just stay a little longer till the time I disappear,

Catching a glimpse of you at a distance far away will be enough for me.

If not the entire journey, then just a few lanes, please walk with me.

Reviews

[Nima.Hope]

Oh who can igonre friendship in his life? While thinking of the vulnarable companionships?
Your poem rememberd me of the need of friendship in life. That's why people who are hidden in their own thoughts,are much more depressed.
Thanks for sharing.
Nima

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks Nima. I am glad you could relate to it. 😊

[Nima.Hope]

The pleasure is mine.

[Troy Henson]

Nicely written. Very vivid and great imagery throughout. Raw emotions and feelings portrayed. Friends in life can be the Saviour if you find the right ones. When you do find the right ones keep them close.

[letroit]

You really do write beautiful lines. I can see these words come right from the heart. Keep up the amazing writing.

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks a lot. I really appreciate you reviewing and liking my poems :)

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
I see you sent me a friend request...but I am not sure why since I do not see that you have reviewed any of my poems?
I found your poem ...which felt more like a story to be quite interesting.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Hey Lisa, I actually did review one of your poem but now that you mentioned I realized that the comment was not posted due to technical glitch...I have left the comment again 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing and beautiful words shared dear poet.
"If not the entire journey, then just a few lanes, please walk with me."
I agree with the above lines. Sometimes we need someone to walk with us. Thank you for sharing the worthwhile poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks a lot...I am really glad that you could relate with my poem..thanks for taking out time to read it 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome. I enjoyed the poetry.

[@r[@nE]

Life is indeed a very long and rough journey and eventually we have to learn to be enough for ourself but it doesn't really mean that we don't need anyone besides us because sometimes just the presence of that one person can help us cope up with difficult situations and give us the strength to deal with our own internal conflicts. It is actually really very well written and expresses inner feeling of a person. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece of work.

Regards,

@r[@ne

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks for such a heartfelt feedback. I totally echo your thoughts here 😊

[@r[@nE]

You're always welcome.

[Aidan Singletary]

While I usually prefer tight lines and rhyme schemes in poetry, I liked the openness of this poem. It was easy to read and understand while keeping profound revelations within. Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed reading it.

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks Aidan for such an honest review. I am just a beginner but when I will start writing proper poems with rhyme scheme, I will share it with you. I really appreciate you taking out time to read this :)

[SM]

This rings so close to home for me. "If not the entire journey, then just a few lanes, please walk with me" - love it.

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks a lot SM 😀 Really appreciate that you took out time to read it

[Chris Shaw]

It can be a great comfort to know we aren't alone when we have a difficult path to walk. At times in our lives we will need that helping hand. A very relatable poem and nicely expressed.

Chris

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks for your feedback Chris. It's always great to have someone by our side 😊

[Chris Shaw]

It is, I have to agree:)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Let me get my walking stick and we shall be on our way. :) This poem has a wonderful human connection. We all need a shoulder to lean on sometimes, a caring soul to listen. Very good write.

[Bliss in Sorrow]

Thanks a lot Fabian for taking out time and reviewing it..really appreciate it 😊