New flame

For when she looked back to him, there was something different.
A new look in her eyes, a new fire burned within her lost soul.
Had he been the cause of that?
Has he killed the part of her, that made her love?

Reviews

[Hitchopotamus]

Wonderfully thought-stirring piece - very real poignant questions. Interesting read

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

This burns deep.

Striking imagery...

~Mr.e

[George Coombs]

Skillfully taking the reader to a deep place in human experience, awesome thought provoking writing

[Karmee]

I feel this write. The soul is such a deep place to be touched. Awesome write