New Moon

The new moon glows 

In the black silk sky. 

So lonely, it seems, 

A little moon and a million stars. 

A million stars, 

Burning with a blinding heat, 

And a single moon, 

Cold and alone, 

trying its best.

I hope you know 

I never meant to hurt you. 

It isn't in me 

To cause you pain. 

I hope you shine, 

Once I have left here. 

I hope my memory 

Won't leave you cold and alone.

Reviews

[iamshadowine]

"A million stars,
Burning with a blinding heat,
And a single moon,
Cold and alone,
trying its best."

"I hope you shine,
Once I have left here.
I hope my memory
Won't leave you cold and alone."

i love the way you've compared these two stanzas!! amazing composition!!
i loved the way you've used moons and stars here!

keep writing :D