Your Eyes

My sister Noxtala wrote this beautiful poem. She is allowing me to post it here. I was wondering if all of you would be will to leave comments and let us know what u think about the poem

When I look into your eyes. 

I see pain and sorrow.

The past crumbled you. 

The present crashed you.

The future will kill you..

You shouldn't look at the negativity in life.

Good always come in pieces. 

Just always think of the

good and the outcomes. 

In the end you should be 

Satisfied. 

"Stars 

only shine in the darkness"

You can only find the best

thing in life with trial +

error

Just remember there is

good in every bad. 

Reviews

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great message! It tells the reader to keep on going no matter how hard it is and that there will be some good that will come out of it. Thank you for posting the poem.

[Elsie]

hay this noxtala. thank-you for reading this poem and i hope to put more up. everything that write i learn by myself and i figured that other might want to read them.

[Yellowpinch]

This is a great reminder to persevere through difficulties and mistakes. Well written and great imagery with 'the past crumbled you/ the present crashed you...

[Elsie]

hay this is noxtala. when i was writing this i was getting out of that type of space and i though others might want to hear about it. i can have my sister post more of what i have written, if you like.