Leaves
A Book by D.L. Simmons
 She's just a baby and her name is Leaves (the story). She's only a few days old so she's far from finished, but tell me what you think so far? :)  © 2009 D.L. Simmons
Author's Note
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more is coming! but tell me anything you want to about this scrap :)
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i don't know what's wrong with the font, but it keeps changing sizes :S
anyone know why it does that?
Posted 14 Years Ago
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i like it hun its put together very well
Posted 14 Years Ago
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flows well
the action she does like she is really throwing the snowball
heheh
amusing
and yeah y
math of all the subjects heheheh.
will wait for the continuity of this
hurry up
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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You are a writing genius!!!!! Flow is purely eloquent, tone is very light but reflective and the flashback (at least that's what it seems to be) is really good, it seems to already aid the story!!! I always love your writings!!!!!!!!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 30, 2009
Last Updated on December 16, 2009
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D.L. SimmonsChandler, AZ
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I graduated high school in 2008, and I have been writing seriously since about 7th grade. I love writing. It feels like I need to do that more than eat and breathe sometimes. Like anyone, I love to ge.. more..
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