Know That I Too
We are never alone (a poem for mental health month)
Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Jack Thiery - Just Business - 2/10/27

Jack Thiery - Just Business - 2/10/27

A Chapter by Anthony

[A high-voiced man speaks slowly and clearly, though noticably attempting to make himself audible over the loud crowds and chiming cash registers and bells that surround him]

The shop's never been busier since ol' Mr. Brown's place burned up! That rusty shack was an eyesore from day one, but i suppose those kids managed to brighten it up a little...

Still seems like he's on everyone's minds, though... is this what he wanted? Was his whole suicide stunt just to for the fame? Because if so, that's a pretty damned stupid trick. [he takes a long pause and a deep breath before letting out a reminiscent sigh and plunges into a brief coughing fit]
I can still hear those kids' tunes, but I can't remember the words...

[I feel no need to continue to analyze these recordings, unless a specific area stands out strongly. They speak for themselves. This is an analysis of the achievements of this unknown city, not of my opinions. Let it not be obscured by my perception, but displayed through my silence.]


© 2011 Anthony


Author's Note

Anthony
To quote the suggestions, "what do you think of the dialogue" seems to be extremely fitting.

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