thank you

just a paragraph of imagery. based on a friend...or friends should i say who have listened to my rants and pretty much helped me through some thick s**t.

A fountain of wisdom

Overflowing with omniscience

Liquid Dropping onto the dead grass

Purifying and reviving. Revitalising.

Regeneration of an impoverished landscape

The flowers are blooming, the evergreen trees growing

The leaves blossoming, carried by the gentle winds

As the clear azure sky watches over everything.

All this beauty

All this peace

The wonderful creation

Of the consistent overflowing fountain.

Reviews

[SmileBig :)]

This is really good! I like it. Nice word choice and flow. Good job :)

[Tai Ryens]

Quite the wondrous piece of poetry.

[Michael G.]

Seriously thinking about this one.

[That_Girl]

This is wonderful. I'm glad you have such loyal friends. Well done. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Great poem man! Awesome imagrery (spelled wrong probably) and everything. Keep up the good work

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks bro. we'll work on halo tomorrow. i'm kinda tired.

[Baby Ricochet]

The introduction to the poem changes the meaning by making it less abstract. Suddenly it's about somebody and that gives it Jahones. So what's up in those " " is the most important part of the poem.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks!....is that a good thing?

[Baby Ricochet]

IT'S A GREAT THING

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

I really like this poem. You're so good with imagery o3o Kind of reminds me of the Great Fairy Fountain from Ocarina of Time...

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! first time in a long while working with imagery so i'm pretty happy you thought it was good! ok i have never seen that....

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Lol Ocarina of Time is a Zelda game, and in each temple place thing there are fountains... and the Great Fairy is a half-naked lady suspended from the ceiling, screaming. It's quite creepy. XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its an awesome game though!!!!

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Yesss!!! Our power just went out for about an hour and I played it :3 I'm stuck in freaking Jabu Jabu's belly. e____e

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol ah your bringing back some good memories, I haven't played that game in awhile... ah good times, good times.