road kid

gun crime...knife crime....something kinda overlooked in london. don't tell me it isn't it may be on the news...but what is being done about it?

Little smirk with the snap back

Photo taken with a phone

Ha-ha

Too many kids on road

That’s fact

Little gun signs with hands

“brap brap”

Never wanna grow up

Stillbirth

Want to give them hell

On earth

Never thought of death

Truth hurts

When its fired from range

Short burst

Tears rolling down the eyes

Can’t talk

Spinal cord receiving lead

can’t walk

punctured lungs and coughing blood

last thought

I should of listened to my mum

Real ta-…..

Reviews

[Michael G.]

Strong performance here. Well written...

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks again michael

[Cole Hayley]

Nice poem man, its diffrent, but raw. I like I like

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks cole!

[Laura Maidah]

Your details are so precise. Nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow. THat's really powerful. Great write man.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks again man. glad you liked it!