amy

er...this is just feelings on paper. nothing too poetic. this is my third ex amy. the one i can safely say i learned the most about myself from.

Loving you had its consequences.

It left me lobotomized.

My natural capacity to cope with life was robbed.

My ears bleeding from your sharp words.

A relationshit left to rot.

But to call it quits and ask me to forgive?

I did so with vacancy so blatant

And smiles so hollow.

I floated inches of the ground walking to your house that night.

I stepped outside myself when stepping inside your bedroom.

I was in my purest form.

Weightless, soulless, no thermal signature.

Yet for some reason

You felt some sort of warmth within me.

Your head continued to rest on my chest

Yet you heard no heartbeat.

You continued to look in my eyes

Even though the features were absent.

Is that hope?

Or naivety.

Reviews

[K-mo]

this is truly a heartfelt piece, the emotions are clear, nice write

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks K-mo! i appreciate that.

[K-mo]

your welcome!

[That_Girl]

Brilliant hun. Sometimes these are the types of people that help us the most in the end though.

[nigrum homonculus]

yeah for real. that's 1 of the 2 things i thank her for.

[That_Girl]

You can't make a comment like that and expect my mind to stay clean.

[nigrum homonculus]

...dude. how in the F**K did you twist that? how?

[That_Girl]

Take a guess love. Just one. I'm sure you'll see it.

[nigrum homonculus]

just tell me.

[That_Girl]

Things she gave you.... Like a blow job....

[nigrum homonculus]

....i'm not even going to say anything to that.

[That_Girl]

No s**t comeback? Damn.

[nigrum homonculus]

you don't deserve the satisfaction love.

[That_Girl]

Mmmmm. I beg to differ.

[nigrum homonculus]

hush....puppy.

[That_Girl]

lmao we have those too you know! I know what they are. :p

[eglantine]

"A relationshit left to rot" haha clever... def can pick up on the raw tenderness of damaged nerves.

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thanks for that. glad you enjoyed it!

[Baby Ricochet]

The first two lines are f**k brilliant.

[eglantine]

agreed

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks!