hypocrites. (word vomit again)

more of a rant. i tried throwing in some artsy fartsy bullshit for good measure

putty molded into jackasses.

the rails waiting to throw you off track. 

throwing sharp words because the truth hurts

when its them who really need the stab proof vest.

they claim to be deep 

but are as shallow as a puddle of piss.

their problems build up on your to-do list

your problems are their moments of laughter.

they'll smile at your face with teeth as white as snow.

but try to get the dirt on you as soon as you leave.

they'll criticize you for your less than holy lifestyle

when its them who sacrifice principle for personal gain.

they'll follow you like shadow at noon

but when dark times arrive, they'll vanish into the abyss. 

they'll claim the world has done them so wrong.

when its them who have done the world so wrong.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

"putty molded into jackasses" I'm gonna to have to plagerize that. This is one of those PhilGod poems that reading it is like getting kicked in the nads. It wakes your a*s right the f**k up. Outstanding Work sir!!!!!!

[nigrum homonculus]

LOOOOL kicked in the nads? that's abit tense bro. thanks for the review man!

[Baby Ricochet]

Ever get kicked in the nads? Changes your perception of the situation real quick. Just like this poem. "Shallow as a puddle of piss" That's pretty shallow. Stinky too.

[nigrum homonculus]

ah yes i have. that's true. no man EVER goes on the offensive after that. its straight fetal position. very stinky, especially if its that stale piss smell you get in s**t neighborhoods.

[That_Girl]

"they claim to be deep
but are as shallow as a puddle of piss." LOVE THAT! Awesome. :D Great poem love!

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thanks! i knew you would like that line

[That_Girl]

;) You know me well.

[nigrum homonculus]

that i do that i do

[That_Girl]

Don't let it get to your head mister.... :p

[nigrum homonculus]

you're the one with the ego here missy.

[That_Girl]

Haha that's true. But mine is contagious. ;)

[nigrum homonculus]

...that is COMPLETE and UTTER rubbish

[That_Girl]

Whatever love. Closet *cought* s**t.... O.O