sweet overdose

just an idea i came up with. idk what was going on in my head. i'll regret this later.

i took one 

cause

i needed to feel it so much 

i

needed to try it but now

i'm

taking some more

because i felt bored

and nothing is happening

oh well

i 

don't need to stop cause for the mean

time

my body's handling the love

i'm 

giving to it

addictive s**t.

its better than a warm 

c**t

but i took to much now i'm sick

in

my kitchen sink now my guts are

all on the floor

but i took some more

cause something is happen

i spat 

out

the chemicals and blood from my

mouth

rife with the stench of hot

bile

but

i took some more

these signs i'll ignore

i like what is happening,,,

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

This is definatly filled with turbulant emotions , but its a little hard to follow and seems a little empty. The occurance is clear though which is good , and is definatly a good start.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks for reviewing! yeah i wrote this in like 3 minutes so it is abit rough and choppy, but i'm glad about what you think of it.

[That_Girl]

I think we need a part two.... hmmm interesting. :D

[nigrum homonculus]

maybe....highly doubt it. i f*****g hate the sight of this

[Baby Ricochet]

I used to do a little then a little wouldn't do it so a little got more and more. Guns and Roses, Mister Brownstown.

[nigrum homonculus]

might have to search that up. inspiration for later. thanks for reviewing man!

[That_Girl]

One of my all time fav songs.